Tour Review: The Mother Code by Carole Stivers

I received a review copy from the publisher. This does not affect the contents of my review and all opinions are my own.

The Mother Code by Carole Stivers

Mogsy’s Rating: 3 of 5 stars

Genre: Science Fiction

Series: Stand Alone

Publisher: Berkley (August 25, 2020)

Length: 352 pages

Author Information: Website

So, I had some mixed feelings for this book. The premise was solid and intriguing, and the science behind it fascinating—not surprising, considering the author is a biochemist by trade and is clearly knows her subject. But on the flip side, the weaker story elements made for a frustrating, unfocused read.

It is the year 2049. Civilization as we know it is about to end, as a DNA-based nano bioweapon is unleashed upon the world and begins to mutate and spread out of control. Top scientists are scrambling to find a cure, and when that proves not enough, they turn to more drastic measures, like genetically engineering children to be grown inside artificial cocoons and be raised by robots. To achieve this, they developed the Mother Code—an intelligence programmed into the machines to give them individual personalities, which would also help them better understand the concepts of maternal responsibilities and instinct.

Years later, in the deserts of Utah, a human child named Kai is born to one of these robots, designated Rho-Z. As they wander the wilderness, looking for others like them, Rho-Z teaches Kai the ways of the world and how to survive in it, the way a real human mother would. Much of the story is split between the past, focusing on the actions of the scientists who created the Mother Code, and in the post-apocalyptic world, in which children like Kai are gradually learning the skills required to one day reintegrate into society, all the while being completely devoted to their robotic mothers. However, even as Kai grows and thrives, changes are occurring in Rho-Z’s programming. Ultimately, she and others like her would be targeted for destruction, leaving Kai with a difficult decision.

While I’m not the biggest fan of duo timelines, I’ve read books that utilize them to great effect, and when they work, they can really add to a story. But somehow in The Mother Code, the two threads simply refused to jive. It also gave the book a sense of being confused, like it wasn’t sure what it wanted to be—a rousing tech-thriller, or a heart-warming tale about an unconventional parent-child relationship? I could appreciate the story Carole Stivers wanted to tell, and it’s certainly one that would only make sense if we could see both sides—both past and present. But this format wasn’t the best.

As a result, I could only feel invested in specific parts of the novel, and maybe the terrifying aspect of an uncontrollable manmade plague had something to do with it, but I definitely latched on to the apocalyptic timeline. The book worked better as a thriller, highlighting the desperation of the world’s plight and the scientists’ race against time to find a solution. The science behind the story is brilliant and sharp, but does also require some background knowledge in the subjects, or at least some patience, to fully appreciate.

That’s not to say I didn’t enjoy the sections featuring Kai and Rho-Z, but while I really like softer, glowing tones of their relationship, the structure of the book was not at all conducive to helping the reader feel emotionally invested in either of them. The characterization also wasn’t the strongest, and there are quite a few POVs to follow. Even the scientist characters felt kind of faceless and hollow, because you had such a strong emphasis on the research and following the progression of the outbreak, there was hardly enough time to develop the people in depth. As well, constantly flipping back and forth between the many perspectives only served to disrupt the pace and increase this emotional distance between the reader the characters.

In short, I think there’s a great story in The Mother Code. Certainly, at its heart is a thought-provoking concept that sci-fi fans with an interest in hard science married with realism would love, especially if you’re into “what-if” scenarios and themes dealing with artificial intelligence, plague outbreaks, and biochemical warfare. That said, at times the content does get a little too technical, and the plot’s disjointedness and pacing issues also made it hard to connect with the characters. Personally, I would have liked to see more developed characterization, smoother transitions between POV changes and improved flow, but going forward, I wouldn’t discount the possibility of reading Carole Stivers again, as she’s obviously got some tremendous ideas for stories.

20 Comments on “Tour Review: The Mother Code by Carole Stivers”

  1. How many POVs are there? For a 350 page book, there can definitely be too many, especially if you’re expected to care about all of them. Sorry it didn’t totally work for you!

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    • Hmm, I don’t think it was a matter of too many POVs, now that I think harder about it. More an issue of the author’s inexperience as I’ve seen more seasoned writers juggle way more characters and still pull off reader sympathy and connection.

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  2. An awesome review – very fair-minded that absolutely nailed what I saw as the weaknesses in this book. Like you, I found it a really frustrating read, because I also saw a lot of promise in this one and wished that Stivers could have made up her mind which story she wanted to tell and then properly develop it. The likes of Adrian Tchaikovsky could have pulled off her approach, but she isn’t experienced or skilfull enough! That said – I definitely want to read her next offering, because I think she’s got a lot of talent.

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    • Yeah, I was well into the book when I read your review, and a lot of what you said resonated with me and I agree 100% – the tone of the book was just confused! I didn’t get into Kai and Rho-Z either, given the choice, I was way more interested in the Michael Crichton-esque tech-thriller parts with the scientists! And yes, great point about Tchaikovsky!

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  3. Thanks for the review, Mogsy. I won’t read this book. The premise is good, as you said, and I wouldn’t be one bit surprised by what might happen in the future; it might happen . . .

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    • Yeah, this book was actually slated to come out earlier this spring, crazy that it just happened to also deal with a mysterious flu-like respiratory virus pandemic. But hey, the idea of being able to grow babies in machine-cocoons would be pretty awesome.

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  4. I didn’t realize this was a dual timeline, which I generally like. I’m very curious about this and I have a copy. But with a bunch of other books I’m more excited about, this might fall to the wayside.

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  5. Dual timelines can make or break a story, depending on the way they are handled, and in this case it would seem that the author was not in complete control of the narrative, or maybe – as the saying goes – bit more than she could chew. Which is a pity, because the premise is a very intriguing one…
    Thanks for sharing!

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    • Yep, this one had many issues common with debuts. You can have an interesting, brilliant idea for a book and know your content like the back of your hand, but writing an engaging story is an art that, for most, only comes from experience. I’d love to check out more of her books as she keeps honing her craft though!

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  6. Certainly an interesting premise. It’s just unfortunate it didn’t all come together better for you. I like the idea of checking in again with the author to see how she develops.

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  7. Mmm, not for me, although I do enjoy dual timeline, but maybe the author didn’t quite pull it off here and given it’s a debut perhaps that’s simply down to being a bit too ambitious maybe?
    Lynn 😀

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  8. This one does have me intrigued, I certainly love a good near future scifi that deals with those subjects but then I’m a bit iffy on the ‘too technical’ aspects. Still, might check it out!

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