Book Review: An Inheritance of Magic by Benedict Jacka

I received a review copy from the publisher. This does not affect the contents of my review and all opinions are my own.

An Inheritance of Magic by Benedict Jacka

Mogsy’s Rating: 4 of 5 stars

Genre: Urban Fantasy

Series: Book 1 of Stephen Oakwood

Publisher: Ace (October 10, 2023)

Length: 384 pages

Author Information: Website

As a fan of urban fantasy, I’ve been curious about Benedict Jacka’s hugely popular Alex Verus books, but as it is currently sitting at about a dozen installments, I’ve always felt a bit intimidated about getting into such a well-established series. However, when I learned that the author was kicking off a new project featuring a new world and characters, I seized upon the opportunity to jump on board.

An Inheritance of Magic introduces Stephen Oakwood, a young man at a crossroads and unsure about what to do with his future. All his friends are building careers, settling down, and making something of themselves while he is still hammering away at a temporary job and living in a rented room in London with his cat named Hobbes. No one understands that all that really matters to him is drucraft—or magic. Two years ago, an eighteen-year-old Stephen made a promise to his father, just before he disappeared, that he was going to do everything he could to keep practicing and improving his skills. Unfortunately, with no one to turn to, he’s had to figure out most of it for himself, and there is still a lot he does not know.

One day after work, Stephen returns home to find a mysterious young woman waiting at his door with a message. That night, he learns that he is a member of the powerful House Ashford and also makes some dangerous enemies. Things take a grave turn when he is attacked by a couple of goons jacked up on drucraft, and Hobbes is beaten badly and put in the hospital. Desperate to save his cat, Stephen has no choice but to seek outside help and unlock his magical potential. As excited as he is to finally learn more about the world of drucraft, he never asked to be a pawn in the Ashfords’ game, and if he is to survive being the target of his insanely rich and psychotic cousins, he’ll need to get stronger—and fast.

It’s been a while since I picked up an urban fantasy, and I was delighted that some of the themes from An Inheritance of Magic reminded me of the Rivers of London series. You begin with a protagonist who is considered an outsider to magic, watching him gradually hone his amateur skills to become more capable and powerful. The magic system is dynamic but also limited by rules—rules that may seem arbitrarily established at first but reveal an intricate design as the story unfolds. Built around the concept of magical items called Sigls, the effects of drucraft are determined by the properties of these extraordinary artifacts and the way they are created. But there is another layer of complexity to this system, one that involves social class and wealth.

For you see, drucraft has become a big money maker for individuals and corporations who control its products and resources, like the essentia wells that provide the fuel to power drucraft and create Sigls. Someone like Stephen who practically lives hand to mouth has almost no chance of breaking into the world of drucraft dominated by super-rich families like House Ashford, with our protagonist receiving a rude awakening when he realizes that even getting his foot in the door will require going further into debt.

Despite the intricacies of the magic system, I liked how I was eased into the world of drucraft alongside Stephen, who is also just now picking up on ins-and-outs as he learns on the fly. This does mean that huge chunks of the book are dedicated to simply throwing explanations at you, though to its credit, the narrative never blatantly resorts to info dumping, nor does the pacing ever truly suffer despite having to take care of some “housekeeping duties” that don’t pertain directly to the plot.

Like most urban fantasy series, I do expect we’ll have to go through a book or two before things really pick up, but I believe An Inheritance of Magic is a fantastic start that has a lot of potential. It’s also an entertaining but comfortable read if you’re a fan of the genre, meaning it won’t break too much new ground but at least you’ll have a lot of fun reading it. Stephen Oakwood is your everyman character—sympathetic and relatable in these harsh economic times—and I’m interested in finding out more about his life and his journey. Especially in light of the huge surprise the final page leaves us with, you can definitely count me in for the next book.

Bookshelf Roundup 10/15/23: Stacking the Shelves & Recent Reads

Bookshelf Roundup is a feature I do every weekend which fills the role of several blog memes, like Stacking the Shelves where I talk about the new books I’ve added to my library or received for review, as well as It’s Monday! What Are You Reading? where I summarize what I’ve finished reading in the last week and what I’m planning to read soon. Mostly it also serves as a recap post, so sometimes I’ll throw in stuff like reading challenge progress reports, book lists, and other random bookish thoughts or announcements.

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Received for Review

My thanks to the publishers and authors for the following review copies received, and be sure to click the links to their Goodreads pages for more details and full descriptions!

 

Red River Seven by A.J. Ryan (Orbit)So curious to read this horror sci-fi amnesia story by fantasy author Anthony Ryan writing as A. J. Ryan.

The Eight Reindeer of the Apocalypse by Tom Holt (Orbit): Switching gears to humor and…Christmas? And on the topic of pen names, K.J. Parker writing as Tom Holt can always be counted on for some wild and quirky stories.

Saevus Corax Deals with the Dead by K.J. Parker (Orbit)And from K.J. Parker himself, the first book of a trilogy about a battlefield salvager taking advantage of the conflict between a nation at war with its neighbors. The book description doesn’t offer much, but my interest is definitely piqued.

The Devil You Know by P.J. Tracy (Minotaur): As we approach the paperback publication of this third book of the Detective Margaret Nolan series, this was a surprise arrival and I’m sad to say I still have yet to try any of these books but I do find the concept behind these police procedural stories intriguing.

Exordia by Seth Dickinon (Tordotcom): I’m actually a little nervous about this one since it’s been years since I read The Traitor Baru Comorant, and even though I loved it, I hated its sequel. I definitely want to give the author a try again though, with this sci-fi novel of first contact.

Mister Lullaby by J.H. Markert (Crooked Lane Books): Last week I featured this book for Waiting on Wednesday and I was so excited when my request for a review copy came through!

Nestlings by Nat Cassidy (Macmillan Audio): Another horror novel being compared to Rosemary’s Baby, 2023 seems to be the year for them. But I just can’t resist!

Reviews

As I look back at my reviews in the last few weeks, I see that very few books have broken the 3.5 star barrier. Needless to say, I’m hoping to get back to a good run like I had at the end of summer, and soon! Things have gotten busy since early October, so my reading has slowed down, giving me a chance to catch up with my write-ups. For anyone counting, that’s six more reviews to write before I’m all caught up, and it was eleven a month ago. Yay, progress!

Recent Reads

Like I said, my reading has slowed down and I only finished two books this week. After the Forest was okay, but I’m starting to wonder if we’ve reached peak saturation when it comes to historical fantasy fairy tale retellings. It just feels like I’ve read a variation of this story many times before. An Inheritance of Magic was a nice change of pace though – literally. It was action-packed and moved fast, and I had a great time with it.

Have you heard of or read any of the books featured this week? What caught your eye? Any new discoveries? I hope you found something interesting for a future read!

Audiobook Review: Hemlock Island by Kelley Armstrong

I received a review copy from the publisher. This does not affect the contents of my review and all opinions are my own.

Hemlock Island by Kelley Armstrong

Mogsy’s Rating (Overall): 3 of 5 stars

Genre: Mystery, Thriller, Horror

Series: Stand Alone

Publisher: Macmillan Audio (September 12, 2023)

Length: 9 hrs and 6 mins

Author Information: Website

Narrator: Angela Dawe

A group of people are trapped on a remote private island on Lake Superior in Kelley Armstrong’s Hemlock Island, a novel which ostensibly starts off as a domestic thriller but then spirals off into something else entirely…but more on that in a bit. The book follows Laney Kilpatrick, a recent divorcee who has been forced to rent her lake house out as a summer retreat to vacationing strangers. It’s not ideal, but the house was a gift from her ex-husband Kit, and after a brief marriage when their relationship fell apart during the pandemic, this was the only way she could keep and maintain the expensive property.

One night, Laney receives an angry call from a renter, this one different from the typical complaint she usually gets. The caller is upset over finding blood all over a bedroom closet, and in light of recent reports about occult activity in the area, Laney decides to check in on the situation herself. With her niece Madison in tow, Laney arrives on Hemlock Island where she meets up with Kit and his sister Jayla who have also come to check on the house over concerns brought to their attention. Four eventually become six when Sadie, an old school friend-turned-enemy, as well as her older brother Garrett, a police officer, turn up uninvited.

Initially, Laney attributes the blood and the other strange occurrences to local pranksters but is quickly disabused of that notion when a dead body is discovered. Not only that, their only means off the island has also been sabotaged, cutting them off from outside help. Things go from bad to worse amidst a storm blowing in from the mainland, meaning that our characters are stuck on the island—right where the killer wants them.

I have seriously mixed feelings over this one. On the one hand, the early sections had me thoroughly engaged with a premise that exuded promise and I was completely hooked on its tension-filled atmosphere. Armstrong can always be counted on to build a palpable sense of anticipation, and her long experience writing mystery and thriller fiction clearly shows. For the first half of this book at least, I felt genuinely invested in the evolving narrative of our characters and curious to see how the plot would unfold.

However, my enjoyment took a nosedive the deeper we ventured into this story. From reading the author’s other books, I know she has the ability to craft characters who resonate with readers, but Laney and Co. are not those. In fact, they almost have a disposable quality to them, like you know this novel is going to be a one-off, so why bother spending too much time on their development? Their personalities and backstories lacked the usual depth, often overshadowed by the relentless pace of the action and thrills.

Speaking of which, the transition from earthly thriller to supernatural horror territory felt awkward and caught me by surprise—and not in a good way. Towards the end, things took a bewildering turn, which wouldn’t have been so bad if it didn’t also feel so rushed. And while I can certainly appreciate the gorier elements of horror, it just felt so out of place here. As a result, this sudden shift in tone after being catapulted into the realm of the inexplicable left me with a sour taste in my mouth and a bad case of whiplash.

Still, I did say I was left with mixed feelings, and they weren’t all negative. Kelley Armstrong sure knows how to write a page-turner, and it’s true I was never bored. While the novel’ execution could have been better, especially when the narrative abruptly shifts from the mundane to the supernatural, this development may very well appeal to readers who enjoy that kind of otherworldly horror. The audiobook version I listened was also highly entertaining, expertly narrated by Angela Dawe. At the end of the day, if you go into Hemlock Island with a ready mindset for unforeseen twists, then you should do just fine.

Book Review: The Water Outlaws by S.L. Huang

I received a review copy from the publisher. This does not affect the contents of my review and all opinions are my own.

The Water Outlaws by S.L. Huang

Mogsy’s Rating: 2.5 of 5 stars

Genre: Fantasy

Series: Book 1/Stand Alone

Publisher: Tordotcom (August 22, 2023)

Length: 488 pages

Author Information: Website

Inspired by what is considered one of the greatest classic novels of Chinese literature, The Water Outlaws is a gender-flipped reimagining of Water Margin, a story about 108 rebels who come together to form a rebel force against a corrupt government during the Song Dynasty. It introduces Lin Chong, a master arms instructor for the emperor’s soldiers—and one of only a few women in the imperial service. However, after running afoul of a high-ranking official abusing his power, she is imprisoned and sentenced to death, and only after a friend begs for clemency is our protagonist saved from execution.

Branded a criminal and exiled to a penal colony on the far reaches of the empire, Lin Chong manages to escape death a second time when she foils a plot by the official, Gao Qiu, to have her killed on the way. With the help of Lu Da, the Flower Monk, she finds her way to the Liangshan bandits, a group of women and other societal outcasts who have made their home in the swamp.

After a lifetime of working hard, following the rules, and generally doing what was expected of her, Lin Chong initially has a hard time settling into this new world. In this cutthroat society where ferocity is a measure of strength and provocative philosophies are not only allowed but encouraged, nothing you were or did before matters. The past is dead. Lin Chong has no choice now but to pluck up the courage and determination to face the future and move on. No longer will she have the option to go quietly on her own way into obscurity and solitude, as she must learn to embrace her new family and fight together as a single force against their common foe.

In Chinese culture, Water Margin, also known as Outlaws of the Marsh, is as ubiquitous as the legend of Robin Hood. It is everywhere, adapted into movies, TV shows, stage plays, graphic novels—you name it, it’s been done. As such, I have been familiar with its story since childhood and was very excited when I learned about this retelling by S.L. Huang. Again like Robin Hood, the original story of Water Margin contains themes of rebellion against oppressive rulers for the benefit and protection of the common people. It also features martial arts in the wuxia tradition and other elements of ancient Chinese history. In other words, it’s pretty damn epic.

So, you can imagine my surprise and frustration, given the epicness of the inspiration behind The Water Outlaws, I felt that much of this retelling was quite a slog. If I hadn’t been so curious to see how the whole “reimagined” aspect of it would pan out, I might even have been tempted to set this one aside. The real kicker is that the first quarter of the book was actually very good, as I was completely captivated by Lin Chong as a protagonist. Here was a woman who has always kept her head down, taking comfort and pride in doing the right thing, yet powerful men were still able to seize her freedom and dignity through no fault of her own. Even as her entire worldview was crumbling around her, Lin Chong’s will to survive made me admire her resilience and strength.

Unfortunately, it’s the middle section that drags, weighed down by exposition and uneven pacing. Any momentum that was built up during the intro runs right smack into a brick wall soon after Lin Chong meets up with the bandits—ironic, seeing as one of the main themes of both Water Margin and The Water Outlaws is comradeship. But to tell the truth, I preferred the book so much more when we were mainly following Lin Chong. The narrative loses its focus once the cast list expands, trying to spread the attention between multiple characters, ultimately struggling to provide any deep or meaningful exploration of any single one.

The result is a scattered storyline that lacks the depth and emotion of the earlier chapters, not to mention it simply much too long. Instead of rehashing the same thing over and over again via multiple perspectives, I would have preferred to see more development into the fantasy element, which was disappointingly light. The magic system, based on artifacts that can grant its wielders supernatural abilities, was an overly simplistic one which felt tacked on as an afterthought.

In the end, I liked the overall concept of The Water Outlaws as a genderbent Water Margin retelling, a unique take which led to an exploration of more resonant themes like justice and rebellion through the lens of feminism. And yet, this novel could also have benefited greatly from rigorous editing, as I think huge chunks of its narrative could have been tossed out or condensed and nothing too much would have been lost. As it is now, certain sections of it are way too drawn out and tedious, and considering the original inspiration, there is just no excuse for any part of this book to be boring.

Waiting on Wednesday 10/11/23

Waiting On Wednesday” is a weekly meme that first originated at Breaking the Spine but has since linked up with “Can’t Wait Wednesday” at Wishful Endings now that the original creator is unable to host it anymore. Either way, this fun feature is a chance to showcase the upcoming releases that we can’t wait to get our hands on!

Mogsy’s Pick

The Spellhouse by Sarah Beth Durst (July 9, 2024 by Bramble)

The Spellshop is a cottagecore cosy fantasy following a woman’s unexpected journey through the low-stakes market of illegal spell-selling and the high-risk business of starting over . . .

Kiela has always had trouble dealing with people, and as librarian at the Great Library of Alyssium, she hasn’t had to.

She and her assistant, Caz, a sentient spider plant, have spent most of the last eleven years sequestered among the empire’s precious spellbooks, protecting the magic for the city’s elite. But a revolution is brewing and when the library goes up in flames, she and Caz steal whatever books they can and flee to the faraway island where she grew up. She’s hoping to lay low and figure out a way to survive before the revolution comes looking for her. To her dismay, in addition to a nosy—and very handsome—neighbor, she finds the town in disarray.

The empire with its magic spellbooks has slowly been draining power from the island, something that Kiela is indirectly responsible for, and now she’s determined to find a way to make things right. Opening up a spell shop comes with its own risks—the consequence of sharing magic with commoners is death. And as Kiela comes to make a place for herself among the quirky townspeople, she realizes that in order to make a life for herself, she must break down the walls she has kept so high.”

Book Review: The Hexologists by Josiah Bancroft

I received a review copy from the publisher. This does not affect the contents of my review and all opinions are my own.

The Hexologists by Josiah Bancroft

Mogsy’s Rating: 4 of 5 stars

Genre: Fantasy, Mystery

Series: Book 1 of The Hexologists

Publisher: Orbit (September 26, 2023)

Length: 386 pages

Author Information: Website

I confess, I wasn’t a huge fan of Josiah Bancroft’s first series, The Books of Babel, but as soon as I read the few pages of The Hexologists, I just knew it was going to be a very different book and one that is more to my liking. After all, it’s not every day you get to read a story about a king who wants to be baked into a cake.

For married couple Isolde “Iz” and Warren “War” Wilby, however, it’s just another typical day on the job for them as magical investigators. After questioning the royal secretary on the king’s apparent madness (he was even about to climb into the oven), our protagonists learn that the monarch is being blackmailed with a devastating, decades-old secret that can throw the line of succession into question and alter the destiny of the kingdom. Despite having no love for the nobility, Iz reluctantly agrees to look into the case by examining the piece of evidence that started it all—a letter written by someone claiming to be the king’s bastard son, stamped with a royal signet ring that supposedly went missing years ago—not to mention, rampaging golem attacks tend to have a way of forcing a decision.

Thus begins an adventurous and sometimes meandering journey through a steampunkish Victorianesque world with Iz and War as they pry into every nook and cranny in search of evidence. Often, these bold undertakings lead our hexologists to discover much more than they bargained for, from resentful old chums from magic school to an epicurious dragon who lives in an enchanted carpet bag. Bolstered by their love for each other and their commitment to helping people, this dynamic husband-and-wife duo never hesitates to dive headfirst into danger to solve even the darkest and most perplexing cases.

As much as I ended up enjoying this novel, I have to say, the first few chapters weren’t easy. While I was hooked on the premise from the start, the writing style did take some time to get used to. No doubt inspired by the setting, stylistically the prose came across vaguely Victorian in that it exhibited a sense of formality that can be felt in both the narrative and dialogue. Occasionally, these long, overly ornate sentences would just jump out at me because they were so awkwardly dense and clunky. It didn’t help either that the early plot was all over the place, making it easy to lose track of what the Wilbys were even supposed to investigate.

Of course, all of this is also my way of complimenting Bancroft, who has managed to capture the setting’s tone so perfectly. Fortunately, too, I found my footing after a few chapters and the rest of the novel went more smoothly. I was able to start connecting to the characters, appreciating their individual quirks and charms. One thing I absolutely loved about The Hexologists is that it features a married couple as its main protagonists, and hence, what romance you see in the story will be very different than what you’d normally get in other books of this type. For one, it’s on the lighter side, but when those little moments of devotion between Iz and War do show up, they’re tender, sweet, and beautiful.

From silly puns to situational irony, there’s also a lot of humor, which starts coming through in spades once the story establishes a solid foundation. The characters’ antics definitely got a few smiles out of me as well. Mystery and action-adventure elements combine to send the plot deeper and deeper into territory both strange and wondrous, and my early doubts eventually gave way to fascination and excitement.

To conclude, while The Hexologists had a somewhat shaky start with occasional moments of disorientation, it ultimately evolved into an engaging narrative of intrigue and daring. With its rich setting and clever wit, I would recommend this novel for readers who enjoy stories that weave together the charm of detective mysteries with paranormal magic. That said, for me it’s Iz and Warren Wilby who totally stole the show. They are simply the most wonderful and endearing pair of protagonists I’ve ever met, and I hope we’ll get to see more in this series starring these two soon!

Book Review: Sword Catcher by Cassandra Clare

I received a review copy from the publisher. This does not affect the contents of my review and all opinions are my own.

Sword Catcher by Cassandra Clare

Mogsy’s Rating: 3.5 of 5 stars

Genre: Fantasy

Series: Book 1 of Sword Catcher

Publisher: Del Rey (October 10, 2023)

Length: 597 pages

Author Information: Website

Years ago, in the bustling city-state of Castellane, a boy named Kel was plucked from an orphanage and brought to the palace to take on the important role of Sword Catcher, the title given to the body-double of the royal heir, due to his resemblance to the young Prince Conor Aurelian. But even as time passed, the two boys remained inseparable, not just out of necessity, but also because of true friendship. After all, they were raised together, for in order to be a convincing stand-in for Conor, Kel must know the prince as well as he knows himself—his thoughts, his mannerisms, his habits. One day, he may even be expected to die for Conor, a sacrifice Kel would make gladly, not only because it is his duty as his bodyguard, but because the two are as close as brothers. However, problems begin to arise as Conor approaches marriageable age, and Kel realizes his protection can only go so far, especially as the prince has grown into a reckless and impulsive young man. When Conor gets mixed up in some trouble, as always, it falls to Kel to clean up his messes.

Meanwhile, elsewhere in the city, Lin Caster is a member of the Ashkar, a community of magic users who are shunned for their abilities. A healer by trade, all Lin wants to do is to further her studies in medicine but is told that certain books and resources are barred to her people. However, to save a dear friend who is very ill, Lin simply cannot stand idly by. If the city won’t help her, then perhaps the Ragpicker King will. As the reigning crime lord of Castellane, he has the power to grant many favors—but for a price. Left with few options, both Lin and Kel find themselves turning to him for answers but end up being caught up in a dangerous web of political intrigue and shady schemes instead.

This is my first book by Cassandra Clare, well known for her immensely popular work in YA. Sword Catcher being her first crack at an adult fantasy series, I really had no idea what to expect, though as always, I was curious to see how an author deals with a switch in genres. Still, one thing I had heard is that Clare can be very descriptive and overly detailed with her writing style, and thus regarded as long-winded by some readers. Admittedly, when I looked at my copy of Sword Catcher, a veritable tome at nearly 600 pages, I did wonder if that might be true.

Ultimately, here’s what I thought: The good news is that, indeed, the author excels at bringing an immersive and intricate world to life. The setting of Castellane was simply phenomenal, a living and breathing backdrop that allows readers to envision it easily in their minds. The city is bursting with life, from its decadent palace halls to the dark alleyways of the criminal quarter. It is also steeped with corruption from top to bottom, which the narrative masterfully and successfully portrays. That said, yes, the writing can be a little verbose at times, though to be fair, I was never bored even when it led to slow pacing. Of course, one can also argue that a more efficient writer could achieve just as much in fewer pages, and, not going to lie, there were times where I found myself reading several chapters only to look back and realize not much has actually happened.

Another thought that I had: Habits die hard. Sword Catcher may be an adult novel in that it features older protagonists and deals with more mature themes, but stylistically, it still shares a lot of YA elements, especially in the way characters interact with each other in dialogue and how the romantic subplots are handled. Nevertheless, character development shines through, and despite their growth falling on the more simplistic and predictable side, all the POVs were sympathetic and relatable, even if I would have preferred to see more of Lin.

At the end of the day, even with a few minor hiccups, Sword Catcher was a captivating read and the start of a series I am definitely motivated to continue. While is officially described as Cassandra Clare’s adult debut, I would say it has enough crossover appeal to satisfy readers of YA as well. As for the novel’s length, could the story have benefitted from a bit of tightening? Perhaps. But in the end, it comes down to personal preference. I’m all for a more streamlined narrative, but in this case, I can also appreciate and see value in the author’s lush prose, making this book a good choice for readers who enjoy complex fantasy worlds featuring rich lore and magical systems.

Bookshelf Roundup 10/08/23: Stacking the Shelves & Recent Reads

Bookshelf Roundup is a feature I do every weekend which fills the role of several blog memes, like Stacking the Shelves where I talk about the new books I’ve added to my library or received for review, as well as It’s Monday! What Are You Reading? where I summarize what I’ve finished reading in the last week and what I’m planning to read soon. Mostly it also serves as a recap post, so sometimes I’ll throw in stuff like reading challenge progress reports, book lists, and other random bookish thoughts or announcements.

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Received for Review

My thanks to the publishers and authors for the following review copies received, and be sure to click the links to their Goodreads pages for more details and full descriptions!

The Ghost Tracks and The Devil’s Promise by Celso Hurtado (Inkshares): These two novels from a paranormal horror mystery series about a young man from the wrong side of track who starts a detective agency can apparently be read individually as standalones, but the publisher was kind enough to send both books in case I want to start at the beginning. Once my TBR calms down a little next month, I just might!

Emily Wilde’s Map of the Otherlands by Heather Fawcett (Del Rey): Needless to say, this was the most exciting arrival of the week. The first book Emily Wilde’s Encyclopaedia of Faeries was probably my first five-star read of the year, and I can’t wait to dive into this sequel.

A Haunting in the Arctic by C.J. Cooke (Berkley): A haunting? In the Arctic? It’s like this book was written just for me. I also enjoyed the author’s The Lighthouse Witches so there are many reasons why I’m looking forward to this one.

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Recent Reads

This week, I got to fit in Shield Maiden, which was okay except for the main character. What’s the nicest way to put this? I hate to use the term Mary Sue as it’s lost all meaning at this point, but there were times where I seriously wondered if I was reading a fanfic of Beowulf. Next was A Haunting on the Hill, which was so-so but I didn’t think it was adding anything too new to the haunted house genre. Edenville, though, was one I nearly DNF’ed. I have to say, it was the closest I’ve come to giving a book 1-star in years.

Have you heard of or read any of the books featured this week? What caught your eye? Any new discoveries? I hope you found something interesting for a future read!

Book Review: Mister Magic by Kiersten White

I received a review copy from the publisher. This does not affect the contents of my review and all opinions are my own.

Mister Magic by Kiersten White

Mogsy’s Rating: 2.5 of 5 stars

Genre: Horror, Mystery

Series: Stand Alone

Publisher: Del Rey (August 8, 2023

Length: 288 pages

Author Information: Website

Books like Mister Magic are why I typically avoid any reviews or media commentary prior to reading so that I can approach them with a blank slate, and hence I did not find out until the end of the novel with the author’s note that this story was meant to be an allegory for some of Kiersten White’s own experiences. Had I known this beforehand, it might have changed a few of my thoughts as I was reading, though I doubt it would have ultimately raised my rating. However, it did explain for some of the heavy-handed messaging I saw, or why in certain sections the writing felt overly self-indulgent.

For as long as she can remember, Val has been living on a farm with her father, working for its owners. She can’t recall anything from her early childhood before he brought her here, and it has never bothered her until his death brought a couple of unexpected visitors to the funeral. One of them is Isaac, claiming that when they were younger, he and Val were on a children’s show called Mister Magic along with three other kids—Marcus, Javi, and Jenny. Or was it four others? Val has no memory at all of what Isaac is talking about, but something about him feels familiar. She also thinks he may be able to help shed some light on why she keeps seeing visions of a mysterious girl in her mind.

As it turns out, the other cast members, now all grown up, have been trying to find Val to get the old gang back together for a special reunion podcast. Apparently, Mister Magic had been quite popular in its heyday, with many nostalgic fans still discussing their favorite episodes on online forums dedicated to the show. But mixed in with these conversations are some unsettling questions as well, like why Mister Magic ended up being canceled. Most agree that it was due to a tragedy, though no one can remember what exactly happened. What’s weirder still is that no footage of the show can be found anywhere, or any proof the show itself even existed, though surely it must have. For Val, who realizes she will find no answers on her own, the only choice left is to accompany Isaac and the others to Utah where the podcaster has set up an interview space in the old house where the original cast supposedly stayed.

There’s no doubt a lot of strangeness to untangle here, and this is certainly the most complex book I’ve read by White to date. Sure, we’re dealing with some pretty abstract themes, not to mention all the bizarre things that happened in the story, but these were not the factors that made the novel a challenging read. Instead, what gave me an incredibly hard time was not knowing where the narrative was going with all this. Mister Magic is being marketed as horror, and to its credit, that’s exactly the way it started, infused with the creeping dread of blank memories and unanswered questions. But by the end, it was clear the story was becoming so much more, and to be honest, with the plot spiraling out of control, I wasn’t sure I liked the direction things were going.

Instead of clarity, all I got was more confusion. Now, I get it—this book is clearly important to the author, who has poured all her pain and trauma into the writing. Speaking with admiration and respect, that takes a lot of guts. With that said, at times I could feel it getting personal, to the point where some of that emotional release was leaking into and intruding upon the story. There were moments where I felt the entire premise was too flawed for the points she wanted to make. Some ideas were hammered home a little too forcefully or injected into the most inconvenient and illogical places, the characters (especially the antagonists) too simplistic or stereotypical to be convincing. Admittedly, after learning Mister Magic is an allegory, I did understand a bit better, along with White’s reasons for writing it, but unfortunately my frustration with the plot structure and heavy-handed writing style remained unchanged.

To sum it all up: it was a mentally draining experience trying to engage with Mister Magic, and while I deeply admire Kiersten White for addressing an issue that impacted her so negatively in her youth, I’m not sure that, without her afterword providing a full explanation, I would have gotten any of it on my own. In many places in the book, the writing simply felt weak, making it difficult to discern the novel’s identity or deeper message.

Waiting on Wednesday 10/4/23

Waiting On Wednesday” is a weekly meme that first originated at Breaking the Spine but has since linked up with “Can’t Wait Wednesday” at Wishful Endings now that the original creator is unable to host it anymore. Either way, this fun feature is a chance to showcase the upcoming releases that we can’t wait to get our hands on!

Mogsy’s Pick

Mister Lullaby by J.H. Markert (November 21, 2023 by Crooked Lane Books)

“In the vein of T. Kingfisher and Christopher Golden, the boundary protecting our world from the monsters on the other side is weakening—and Mister Lullaby is about to break through.

The small town of Harrod’s Reach has seen its fair share of the macabre, especially inside the decrepit old train tunnel around which the town was built. After a young boy, Sully Dupree, is injured in the abandoned tunnel and left in a coma, the townspeople are determined to wall it up. Deputy sheriff Beth Gardner is reluctant to buy into the superstitions until she finds two corpses at the tunnel’s entrance, each left with strange calling cards inscribed with old lullabies. Soon after, Sully Dupree briefly awakens from his coma.

Before falling back into his slumber, Sully manages to give his older brother a message. Sully’s mind, since the accident, has been imprisoned on the other side of the tunnel in Lalaland, a grotesque and unfamiliar world inhabited by evil mythical creatures of sleep. Sully is trapped there with hundreds of other coma patients, all desperately fighting to keep the evils of the dream world from escaping into the waking world.

Elsewhere, a man troubled by his painful youth has for years been hearing a voice in his head he calls Mr. Lullaby, and he has finally started to act on what that voice is telling him—to kill any coma patient he can find, quickly.

Something is waking up in the tunnel—something is trying to get through. And Mr. Lullaby is coming.”